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| THE WRONG WAY TO SAY IT | THE RIGHT WAY TO SAY IT |
| We would appreciate it if you could give us an advice on the feasibility of opening an Asia branch. | We would appreciate it if you could give us any advice on the feasibility of opening an Asia branch. |
| We would like to start with an initial order of 5000 units but it depends of the discount. | We would like to start with an initial order of 5000 units but it depends on the discount. |
| I will be sending Jack Faber to pick you up at the station. He will be dressed with a bright red company jacket. | I will be sending Jack Faber to pick you up at the station. He will be dressed in a bright red company jacket. |
| We have made reservations for you at the Sheraton during the five days that you will be with us. | We have made reservations for you at the Sheraton for the five days that you will be with us. |
| You should have some free time to go sightseeing for the weekend. | You should have some free time to go sightseeing during/at/on the weekend |
| Could you please explain me how I get from the airport to your office? | Could you please explain to me how I get from the airport to your office? |
| After closing the deal we went to a pub for to have a drink and celebrate. | After closing the deal we went to a pub to have a drink and celebrate. |
| Our company has been doing business in South America since many years. | Our company has been doing business in South America for many years. |
| I know your product for over 20 years. | I have known your product for over 20 years. |
| You shouldn't have any trouble finding us. There is a Burger King right in front of our office. | You shouldn't have any trouble finding us. There is a Burger King right opposite our office. |
