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Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 2:00 pm

Thanks by to correct mistake of grammar. I want to tell yours a history.

Susan lives in Londres. She is very happy with her family and her work. she has two children. Her husband lost his work because the bank for he was working since years lot closed. Now he is very depressed. We wants since Spain to send a message of hope. Sure that there are hopes of a solution to the problem. Susan tryes that her husband will be more optimistic. They have a children wonderfull and they will found a solution. We will have going in February at their house.

Bye.

Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 2:40 pm

eugenia paiz wrote:

Thanks by to correct mistake of grammar. I want to tell yours a history.

Susan lives in Londres. She is very happy with her family and her work. she has two children. Her husband lost his work because the bank for he was working since years lot closed. Now he is very depressed. We wants since Spain to send a message of hope. Sure that there are hopes of a solution to the problem. Susan tryes that her husband will be more optimistic. They have a children wonderfull and they will found a solution. We will have going in February at their house.

Bye.

Corrections and suggestions: Thanks for correcting my grammar mistakes. I want to tell you a story.

Susan lives in London. She is very happy with her family and her work. She has two children. Her husband lost his job because the bank where he was working for many years closed. Now he is very depressed. We want to send from Spain a message of hope. Surely there is hope for a solution to the problem. Susan wants her husband to be more optimistic. They have wonderful children and they will find a solution. We are going in February to their house.