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Spica
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Joined: 20 Jul 2004 |
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| Location: Heidelberg, Germany |
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| Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 4:02 am |
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Hi Rosa,
I congratulate you for writing the first message and taking the big step of writing in another language. I'm going to make a few corrections and I hope that they help you.
Hi,
I think I am the first “beginner” who writes in this section.
More natural would be: I think I am the first beginner to write in this section
I am learning English because it´s most important for my professional development but it´s complicated for me.
The word "most" is optional here. I personally think it sounds better without the word "most". Also, when you use "more", the reader is expecting a comparison. For example, it's more important than _. And I'm not sure about your use of the word "complicated". Maybe you mean "difficult", but I'm not sure.
To read is easier than to write, and to write is easier than to speak.
It will sound more natural to use the gerund rather than the infinitive. For example: Reading is easier than writing, and writing is easier than speaking.
To read and to write are easier because you can dedicate more or less time to prepare but in a conversation it isn´t possible because your ability to react is shorter.
Here is another place using the gerund sounds more natural: Reading and writing are easier ...
This forum is a good way to practice English ....and as I want to learn, I hope to learn with your help.
Bye.
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