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1. Who we are?

ORBITA is a company that is born with a clear objective, to offer solutions immediate to our clients. We are a study specialized in professional services of design and communication. Our mission towards our clients has a great objective: to obtain by means of the use of the graphical communication, that their services, products, ideas, concepts or values reach to their different public from effective and efficient way, adapting always to the necessities and specific possibilities to us of each client. By the same, for us there is so no small project that it does not interest to us, nor so great that we did not prune to develop. We have the certainty that the accomplishment of good projects is only possible with good clients; that is to say, companies and institutions with you want we pruned to share an attitude and a commitment focused towards the quality and the excellence, in a climate of mutual confidence and respect.


2. Services

ORBITA offers a rank of services of global solutions, from the previous concept of the idea to his later elaboration in different formats. The menu of services with which we can take care of its necessities of graphical communication is the following one:

• Corporative Design: annual logotipos, stationery stores, information, reports, manual of corporative identity, projects of signals, etc.

• Publishing Design: internal magazines, books, pamphlets, catalogues, bulletins, etc.

• Printed Advertising and promotion: outer announcements for magazines, newspapers and means, posters, invitations, flyers, collateral calendars, and other products.

• Product Image: labels, packages, packings, etc.

• Multimedia: design of Websites, CD-ROM interactive, programming HTML and Flash, etc.



3. Contact

To trust ORBITA is to bet with the future, knowing that behind there is a great group. In ORBITA we understand the value of the ideas. For more information about our work visit us:

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Carlitox,

This is an interchange forum: you give advice in your own language, and get advice in the studied language.

Up to now, you have only shown interest in others correcting your texts.

I understand that you might need this text for your advertising, but... have you thought of helping others with their Spanish before asking for more help?

You know, "toma y daca"

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so sorry, I need some corrections and nobody does.

Do you can help me Lai Lai?



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HI MARIA
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How are u?

My name is Carlos
I'm Graphic Designer
I'm 30
I'm runner

what about you?


See ya,


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karlitoxcr wrote:
so sorry, I need some corrections and nobody does. Do you can help me Lai Lai?

Corrections and suggestions: I'm so sorry, I need some corrections and nobody does (no entiendo esto). Can you help me Lai Lai? Wink

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karlitoxcr wrote:
so sorry, I need some corrections and nobody does. Do you can help me Lai Lai?

Corrections and suggestions: I'm so sorry, I need some corrections and nobody does (no entiendo esto). Can you help me Lai Lai? Wink


I bet it means : "I need some corrections and nobody makes THEM (the corrections).
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LaiLai wrote:
I need some corrections and nobody makes THEM (the corrections).

Correction: I need some corrections and nobody does THEM (the corrections) Wink

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Myprofe wrote:
LaiLai wrote:
I need some corrections and nobody makes THEM (the corrections).

Correction: I need some corrections and nobody does THEM (the corrections) Wink


You English natives think you have big trouble to distinguish "ser" and "estar".... :cry:
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You English natives think you have big trouble to distinguish "ser" and "estar".

Correction: You English natives think you have big trouble distinguishing between/differentiating between "ser" and "estar". Wink

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I think we have the same problem with make and do
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Myprofe wrote:
LaiLai wrote:
I need some corrections and nobody makes THEM (the corrections).

Correction: I need some corrections and nobody does THEM (the corrections) Wink


Hmmmm.... Maybe this is a regional difference (and I am aware that MyProfe is from the U.S.), but, I have no problem with somebody making corrections. It sounds fine to my ears. In fact, I probably would say "making corrections" instead of "doing corrections". But maybe that is just me. :-)
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Spica wrote:
I probably would say "making corrections" instead of "doing corrections".

Comment: So would I! This is tricky (complicated). Let me try to explain.

Each time I visit this forum I read through the new messages in the English sections and make corrections and suggestions where needed. But sometimes, when the messages are long or the corrections are difficult, I don't feel like doing it. I use do at the end of the sentence to refer to the activity in general. Had I (If I had) included the word corrections I would have used make.
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